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I walk the path, which was chosen. It is filled with greef and death. It has no end. No past. No beginning. Just now. I walk alone, along a path with no destination. I live in silence. I have forgotten my voice. Somewhere, along the way, I lost my humanity. I'm exchausted, can't catch my breath. I need air. I cant sleep. I can never go home... I have no reason, no explenation. Everybody is dead, leaving me alone. Everybody has lied. Saying they loved me.. That they'ed never leave me.. That we'ed be together forever... Wether they are lying to themselves, or to others. Everybody lies.. Everybody hides. You can never know someone completely. Never trust them. Or you'll end up like me.. Wandering a path with no end, no beginning, Just now. I'm broken inside. "Never trust, Never love." These words flow repeatedly through my mind. Loving you was my mistake Trusting you was my death sentence. But losing you, is my eternal Hell... You are hunting me like a ghost. You are there, but then you're not... My own Dark Paradise... I can feel you're touch lingering. You're lips, marking every part of me... But there is no more you.. No more love.. Now I'm alone.. Standing at the edge. All I see is darkness.. Now I'm falling, further and further... The end is finally here. No more darkness... Will you be waiting on the other side, my love? | ||||||||||||||
 | Lau G.N. | 2012-05-12 12:15:59 |
hmm. smukt og flot skrevet, meget levende og reelt. jeg ser for en mand der står på kanten og skriver sine sidste ord til hende inden han gør ...... noget dumt. C):)
jeg skriver ikke selv så meget noveller, men du skriver godt og kan roligt være stolt af dine evner. C):)
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jeg skriver ikke selv så meget noveller, men du skriver godt og kan roligt være stolt af dine evner. C):)
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